Post by theik on Jan 27, 2008 10:20:09 GMT -5
Basically, my suggestion is to slightly enlarge the descriptions of the routes, make them a bit more detailed. 'The shortest of the routes' for route one example, isn't exactly very detailed. Is it grass? Is it desolate? Are there trees?
Basically, the routes could use a bit more describing. A sticky with a detailed version of the route description would be very nice for adding more RP flavour. You could even add a quick picture of how the route might have looked.
Example I made in ten seconds so is hardly high quality:
Route one may very well be one of the shortest routes in Dianto, yet it can take a pretty long time to traverse. Tall grasses have overtaken just about any sign of an actual path, and wild Pokémon could be hiding in each and every patch.
For many trainers, it will stand as a reminder that their love for Pokémon will sometimes take them to areas that are less than traversable, and that even the start could be difficult.
Luckily enough, the Pokémon on Route One are relatively docile, so even with Route One being quite difficult to track through, it should never become too dangerous.
Scattered throughout the plain of grass, a few rocks can be found that are used by the local Sandshrew as hiding spots. A sole, massive tree stands in the center of Route One, a place where many of the nearby bird Pokémon nest.
Currently, the Route is covered in the last remnants of the Winter's cold, a layer of snow still present in several places.
Basically, the routes could use a bit more describing. A sticky with a detailed version of the route description would be very nice for adding more RP flavour. You could even add a quick picture of how the route might have looked.
Example I made in ten seconds so is hardly high quality:
Route one may very well be one of the shortest routes in Dianto, yet it can take a pretty long time to traverse. Tall grasses have overtaken just about any sign of an actual path, and wild Pokémon could be hiding in each and every patch.
For many trainers, it will stand as a reminder that their love for Pokémon will sometimes take them to areas that are less than traversable, and that even the start could be difficult.
Luckily enough, the Pokémon on Route One are relatively docile, so even with Route One being quite difficult to track through, it should never become too dangerous.
Scattered throughout the plain of grass, a few rocks can be found that are used by the local Sandshrew as hiding spots. A sole, massive tree stands in the center of Route One, a place where many of the nearby bird Pokémon nest.
Currently, the Route is covered in the last remnants of the Winter's cold, a layer of snow still present in several places.
